Paige I really enjoyed reading your recount even though I was sorry to read about your uncle. You have included some different sentence starters and sentence lengths, well done. You have also organised your ideas into paragraphs.
Next time think about including different language features like similes.
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Paige I really enjoyed reading your recount even though I was sorry to read about your uncle. You have included some different sentence starters and sentence lengths, well done. You have also organised your ideas into paragraphs.
Next time think about including different language features like similes.
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